I would just like to share some Big Writes from last Friday that really stood out for me, because I have four children who are really focusing on making their writing wish come true!
Morgan
Fun and games
Interestingly pirate play card games in the deck to make them not bored. Most pirate play a violin or a something else to play and dance. Some pirate make a model ship out of wood and to make it better.
Food and drink
Pirate eat smelly horrible and disgusting rotten meat every day. Most pirate drink rum to make the rotten smelly and disgusting meat better. Some pirate drink rum and eat solid hard biscuit when they’re hungry. They eat stew sometime to make them bit happy. Pirate eat salty meat to get them going along.
Kayden
Fun and Games
Did you know pirates love playing games? Most pirates hate building toy ships and cars.
Food and drink
Unusually pirates have to eat salty meat. All pirates cannot drink the salty water.
Punishment
Some pirate break the code. If you break the code you will get hit with a tigers tail.
Kyle B
Punishment
They get hit by a cat o nine tails and they can see the captain.
Food and drinks
Some pirates drink salty water out the sea and eat smelly meat and biscuits.
Fun and games
Pirates love to play flutes and dance and sing.
Kyle F
Fun and games
Pirates had to play card games in the cabin and in the day time. Most pirate hated building model ships because it was too fiddly.
Food and drinks
Did you know pirates had to eat disgusting salty and rotten meat? Surprisingly pirates had to eat rock solid biscuits they would be hungry and they had to drink horrible rum.
Punishment
If you broke the rules you would be sent to see the captain. If you broke the other rules you would be whipped with the cat o nine tails also you would be whipped 39 times.
I hope you enjoy their writing as much as I did!
Miss Dale.