This week we were trying to write a longer version of the ending to Sleeping Beauty. Mrs Wheelhouse and Mrs Charlesworth were really impressed with how focused and quiet Meerkats were for the whole 45 minutes so well done everybody! Lewis’ and Scarlet’s writing really stood out because they both had clearly thought carefully about their sentences and used full stops correctly. Let us know what you think!
Lewis –
The prince kissed the princess. Then the princess woke up. Then the prince said please will you marry me. The princess said yes. They got married. They lived happily ever after.
Scarlet –
One sunny day the handsome, brave strong prince slowly kissed the beautiful sleeping princess. Then she woke up with her big, beautiful gleaming eyes. Next the prince whispered “Do you want to marry me?” and the princess shouted “yes!” Later on that day they had a wonderful party with dancing, music and yummy cake. And they all lived happily ever after.